A story!!!!!

Here is a story I wrote at school write a comment on how you felt about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!Be nice though!!!!:]



Abby
Abby is as brown as the Dusty earth, and her mane and tail are as dark as the midnight sky!
Sometimes when I am close to the field I can hear her hoofs THUNDER down the field and it sounds almost like thunder rolling across the gloomey gray sky!
Somtimes on rainy days she gets as frisky and wild as a mustang kicking her heels up in the air and slinging her head back as fierce as a tiger!
But on calm spring mornings she is as calm as a quiet as a drowsy puppy just about to go to sleep.